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Tuggerah Lake Sunset
Copyright ©2005, Steve Daggar
I know this could probably do with some foreground interest, but I just liked the mood & colours
| Photographer: | Steve Daggar |
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| Folder: | Steves Pics |
| Uploaded: | 2005-Aug-14 01:24 EDT |
| Current Rating: | 8.00/1 (Weighted rating: 7.99) View all ratings Delete my rating |
| Copying allowed: | No |
| Camera: | Olympus E-1 |
| Lens: | Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5 |
| Lens Adapter: | None |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Aperture: | f14 |
| Shutter Speed: | 4 secs |
| Focal Length: | 14 |
| Flash: | No |
| Tripod/Monopod: | Yes |
| Critique Level: | Dead Honest Critique |
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| MFT Time 21:38 May 18 2013 |
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love the mood of the colors. unsure if the horizon is straight or not. would have cropped the lower left dark thing and eliminated the bit branches left.
michael hoefner HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 04:35 EDT on 2005-Aug-14 [Reply]
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I like this a lot. You're right about the mood amd colours - thats what its all about. I also like the lone star top right, a nice touch. I agree with Michael about the horizon. There is an unmistakeable slope from right to left which can be simply fixed in a second or two. Having said that though I like your image a lot.
Eugene Donohoe HoF Win ♥ ¤1 $ at 04:55 EDT on 2005-Aug-14 [Reply]
And that would be Venus, top right?
Very clean looking, Steve. I agree that cropping the bottom and a bit on the left would improve it. There is no useful foreground detail (and that doesn't hurt this image) so get rid of those hangers on. There is some barrel distortion on the horizon waterline. Best wishes.
Rob Smith HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 06:42 EDT on 2005-Aug-14 [Reply]
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Excellent observation Rob !
Eugene Donohoe HoF Win ♥ ¤1 $ at 19:54 EDT on 2005-Aug-14 [Reply]
Who needs a foreground?
This works nicely as a minimalist composition - I agree with the others about removing the distractions in the bottom left.
Danny Yee ♥ ¤ $1 at 21:59 EDT on 2005-Aug-14 [Reply]