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Copyright ©2005, Stéphane Luciani

Photographer: Stéphane Luciani
Folder: Oly E300 images
Uploaded: 2005-Aug-18 11:08 EDT
Current Rating: 0.00/0 (Weighted rating: 7.99)
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Camera: Olympus E-300
Lens: Olympus 40-150mm f3.5/4.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: 4.5
Shutter Speed: 1/125
Focal Length: 150
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Dead Honest Critique

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Window shots are interesting but I think there are problems with this one if you don't mind my observing. The light is very flat and the window is imho too centrally placed which creates compositional problems, e.g., the large expanse of grey on the right, which compounds the sense of light flatness. If the window were placed on the right this would have solved that problem but you would still be left with the problem of the bush and the flat light. However a different photographer positioning could be very interesting as the texture and colour in the wall are both very interesting and worthy of further exploration if you have the opportunity to do so.

Eugene Donohoe HoF Win ¤1 $ at 15:08 EDT on 2005-Aug-18 [Reply]