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A walk on the beach

A walk on the beach
Copyright ©2005, Valter Fatia ¤

very very early in the morning...

Photographer: Valter Fatia ¤
Folder: Valter Fatia
Uploaded: 2005-Sep-12 20:40 EDT
Current Rating: 8.00/1 (Weighted rating: 7.99)
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Camera: Olympus E-1
Lens: Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: 1/100
Shutter Speed: f7.1
Focal Length: 14 mm
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
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concept. But here it seems to be a bit to hard contrast. Would like to see the wet sand in FG really smooth.

Regards,

Horst Schmier HoF Win ¤ $ at 18:56 EDT on 2005-Sep-13 [Reply]

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Agree with Horst...and this high contrast then dont look good on the water so you could maybe mask that away... and leve some of the contrast in sand but not so strong like here...anyway,like horst said..i lke the concept.

denis grzetic HoF Win ¤ at 18:59 EDT on 2005-Sep-13 [Reply]

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Thank's fo commenting!

Horst: What is FG?! It's been a day since i made this conversion and I have to agree about the high contrast Denis: About the water: the high contrast on the fading water creates some depht that i like (and that's why i chose this kind of look...) about the sea in itself i canīt do much because it was the position of the sun that created the current tone on the water( http://www.myfourthirds.com/document.php?id=14028 and http://www.myfourthirds.com/document.php?id=14105 ) , if i had it masked away it would live, in my view a muted scene, but i will try that tomorrow, since i will have to start a plain new conversion.

Valter Fatia ¤ at 19:46 EDT on 2005-Sep-13 [Reply]