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abstract in gray...

abstract in gray...
Copyright ©2006, denis grzetic HoF Win ¤

This is taken by mistake at iso 400 (previous settings) so when i open this in PS notice that red and blue channel is full of noise...so this is all green channel...i will probably reshoot this because it is close to my house...

Photographer: denis grzetic HoF Win ¤
Folder: denis bw 2006
Uploaded: 2006-Feb-07 06:41 EST
Current Rating: 8.50/10 (Weighted rating: 8.35)
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Camera: Olympus E-1
Lens: Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 400
Aperture: 11
Shutter Speed: 1/60
Focal Length: 14
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Dead Honest Critique

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like it. grain is OK only in the lower part its a bit too dominating. like the curves. compo works well for me. as said before: like it.

michael hoefner HoF Win ¤ $ at 07:07 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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I love the tones and I like the lines in this picture. Good composition.

Margriet van Tulder ¤ at 09:26 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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Great counter pointing going on here, if you do reshoot I shall be interested to see if you can better the grey graduations! These seem very good.

Martin Blunt ¤ at 09:47 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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This is different from your "normal" landscapes and scenes that we see from you Denis.. I like it; interesting curves and angles; treatment/ texture is great with perhaps the only exception the grain in the lower part as Michael pointed out.

vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ¤ $ $ at 10:21 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

Very interesting ...

POV you have choosen here, denis. Grain also donīt bother me. Greyscale seems to be phantastic. About abstract or detail shot I refer to E. Edwin in http://myfourthirds.pixelcritic.com/document.php?id=20301 Think this is more abstract then detail. Anyway an interesting other "denis", like it.

Kind regards,

Horst Schmier HoF Win ¤ $ at 10:25 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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I love the graphics of this abstract. The noise does not bother me and, in fact, I kind of like the way it works with the smooth gray above.

Frank Brault ¤ $ at 18:36 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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Thank you all for comments...glad that you like it...

denis grzetic HoF Win ¤ at 18:59 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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Very nice detail/abstract Denis...a real sense of serenity to this and for what it's worth, I don't mind the grain showing up isnce it softens the image a little making it that bit more seductive in terms of texture and so on.

Very nice.

Best wishes- Andy

Andrew McLean HoF ¤ $ at 21:26 EST on 2006-Feb-07 [Reply]

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simple, abstract and effective

dee vee HoF Win ¤ $1 at 00:27 EST on 2006-Feb-08 [Reply]

Can't see a problem.

Denis, I'm less inclined these days to be put off by noise or other such influences. If they work with the subject, they work for me. The green channel seems to have enough information, in this case, to produce a pleasing result. Definitely a different 'Gzetic' and a variation I like to see - to show your full repertoire. Can't say I've ever seen one of your shots that I flat out didn't like in some way. I like best in this one the luminous lighting (not hard and not soft). 700px x 654px! Was there something particular in the compo that made you avoid 700x700px? Just curious. Best wishes.

Rob Smith HoF Win ¤ $1 at 06:23 EST on 2006-Feb-08 [Reply]

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tahnk you Andy,Deevee and Rob.

No, i just try some diff. crops on this and it finnish this way...a new color version have also some slightly different crop...

denis grzetic HoF Win ¤1 at 07:34 EST on 2006-Feb-08 [Reply]

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Thank you Doro...

denis grzetic HoF Win ¤1 at 18:20 EST on 2006-Feb-08 [Reply]