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Papaver rhoeas (02)
Copyright ©2006, Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $
Reworked after some good suggestions and burned the farthermost right stem with ovary.
Other pictures and story of this small series....
Other pictures and story of this small series....
| Photographer: | Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ |
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| Folder: | Horst Schmier |
| Uploaded: | 2006-Jun-22 02:38 EDT |
| Current Rating: | 9.50/2 (Weighted rating: 8.49) View all ratings Delete my rating |
| Copying allowed: | No |
| Camera: | Olympus E-1 |
| Lens: | Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5 |
| Lens Adapter: | None |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Aperture: | f/6.3 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/250 |
| Focal Length: | 54 |
| Flash: | No |
| Tripod/Monopod: | No |
| Critique Level: | Dead Honest Critique |
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This is a wonderful and extraordinary composition with beautiful light and detail; in my opinion, the long stem on the far right which is not focused - draws the attention away from the flower and the small bud, both of which are fantastic. If it were cropped to take it out, it would make this a HoF photo, a definite 10!
vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ $ at 07:09 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
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A very special composition with a fine placement of the flower and the bud with the light shinning on them. I agree it would look better with the long stem on the right cropped out.
Amy Anderson ♥ ¤ at 07:40 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
Thanks ....
Vaggelis and Amy for commenting. Appreciated as always. Re stem: I agree that it might be a bit too distracting. On the other hand IMHO the counterbalance to the flower would be not enough with only one stem (thatīs the reason for this compo). A solution could be to blur and darken the stem a bit.
Thanks again, best,
Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 08:09 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
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I agree, blurring and darkening would also work.....
vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ $ at 08:25 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
Itīs done ...
see above.
Best,
Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 15:15 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
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imho its a perfect 10 now!
vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ $ at 15:33 EDT on 2006-Jun-22 [Reply]
Thanks ...
for your suggestion and generous rating, Vaggelis.
Best,
Horst Schmier HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 04:28 EDT on 2006-Jun-23 [Reply]