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Copyright ©2006, dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1

Underprivileged class amenities or lack of in Chinatown tight living space

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dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1
Folder: Urban Works
Uploaded: 2006-Sep-17 02:07 EDT
Current Rating: 8.50/2 (Weighted rating: 8.16)
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Camera: Olympus E-1
Lens: Olympus 14-54mm f2.8/3.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: f8
Shutter Speed: 1/400
Focal Length: 54
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: Yes
Critique Level: Detailed Help and Encouragement

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this is bang on! great comp, great light and atmosphere :-) love it

nicholas pye Win ♥ ¤ $ at 04:21 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

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Very good DV. Pleasing composition, it all fits nicely together. I like the conversion, but may have been tempted to make it warmer / more sepia like (but that's me, not you!!). Like it regardless

Andy

Andy Collin HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 11:28 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

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I am curious about your choice to place your whites in about Zone V or VI. The Highlights don't even make it to Zone VIII and properly they should be in Zone IX or even Zone X in extreme cases. The histogram flat lines from about the middle on up and ends well before its limit. The result is, this image looks quite dull and flat, especially for a mid-day image. A more judicious use of the available output levels and this image would shine!

E. Edwin Ennor ~ (Eł) HoF Win ♥ ¤ $ at 11:57 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

thanks all for the comments and feedback

thx EEE but i purposedly toned down the image in curves ...i don't like bright images , just my preference ...cheers ;-)

dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 12:08 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

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Andy ...i added warmth based on your request ;-))

dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 12:20 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

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This update also brightened the image to include more output levels too, so the general appearance has improved, and the histogram above no longer matches the image presented.

E. Edwin Ennor ~ (Eł) HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 13:34 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

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much better now in my book. Klaus

Klaus Er HoF Win ♥ ¤1 at 14:47 EDT on 2006-Sep-17 [Reply]

thanks all for the comments and feedback

thx EEE for taking the time to comment...im not saying you're wrong...as a matter of fact i think you're right technically for the picture is underexposed according to the levels curve but technically correct is 1 thing, there's also the element of personal touch and taste ...in this case i started it out w a perfectly expoed image then purposedly set the curve down the last minute since the image was too 'bright' for my taste ...your mileage may vary...dont let my response deter you, feel free to continue to comment ;-))

cheers,

dee vee HoF Win ♥ ¤ $1 at 11:14 EDT on 2006-Sep-18 [Reply]