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Copyright ©2007, Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1

a bit trivial, but why not ...

Selected for the Hall of Fame on 2009/Aug/02

Photographer: Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1
Folder: Hall of Fame 2009
Uploaded: 2007-Oct-13 16:32 EDT
Current Rating: 10.00/13 (Weighted rating: 9.53)
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Camera: Olympus E-500
Lens: Olympus ED 50-200mm f2.8/3.5
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 100
Aperture: 3.5
Shutter Speed: 1/160
Focal Length: 200
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Dead Honest Critique

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i like things that are trivial ...isnt' life too complex for our own good ? (reminds me of this shot i took a while back http://www.myfourthirds.com/document.php?id=26148 ) ... cheers ;-))

dee vee HoF Win ¤ $1 at 19:36 EDT on 2007-Oct-13 [Reply]

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Doesn't look trivial to me, Klaus! I think this is fabulous. I've seen a lot of abstracted giraffes in my time, but this one really stands out. My only quibble is that there are a couple of smudgy grey areas that I think should be pure black next to the top edges of the hair (lower left and also one near the mid to upper right). But those would be easily fixed and don't affect my rating. This is really clever and quite beautiful.

Elisabeth Spector HoF Win ¤1 $ at 20:27 EDT on 2007-Oct-13 [Reply]

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Hi Klaus,

Clever and beautiful is what comes to mind as well when I look at this. What I find particularly attractive is the way you have framed this. Excellent work!

vaggelis fragiadakis HoF Win ¤ $1 $ at 20:30 EDT on 2007-Oct-13 [Reply]

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Very unusual and interesting solution ... Good work.

Igor Tarasenko ¤1 at 01:13 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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This is really great Klaus. I like the simplicity and the fact that we can all recognise this beast from a small portion of the body. The right hand side does seem a little soft for perfection but it's pretty damn close. I tried something similar once with a shot of a duck but this is much better.

adrian tear HoF Win ¤ $ at 06:08 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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No, this is certainly not trivial in any way. It demonstrates your ability to see the world around you, and proves that real abstractions can be found all around us if we are visually sensitive enough as photographers to see them. No, this is a brilliant image in every way, from the wonderful chosen framing to make an abstract image if what is a rather typical thing, in this case a giraffe (probably in a zoo?), maybe not a common object, but certainly not an unknown one to any viewer.

E. Edwin Ennor ~ (E³) HoF Win ¤ $ at 10:34 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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Wonderful photo! Great idea and perfect realiztion. This image reminds me of the series "Animals" by Nine Francois. Did you plan to get something like this or this is just a chance?

Alex Scherbakov ¤ at 10:59 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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Love it!

Simple, abstract, fine conversion!!

Andy

Andy Collin HoF Win ¤ $ at 11:48 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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There isn't anything trivial about this one. Its simplicity, lack of tone and overall shape are top notch.

Valter Fatia ¤ at 13:19 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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I like it also...it has been spoken.

jeff eichen HoF ¤ at 13:29 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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Quite nice, Klaus. Love the composition and tonal range. Very simple, but compelling.

Regards, Chris

Chris O'Neill ¤ $ at 14:16 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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!! that's a surprise - thank you @ all for commenting and rating !! Dee - maybe I remembered your shot subconsciously. I quite liked it then and I still it is very good. Elisabeth - you screen is obviously calibrated at a lower contrast setting than mine. These smudges are bokeh (see below, if the link works). I tried to remove them and on my screen I don't see them anymore! Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket Vaggelis, Igor, Pascal - thank you very much! Adrian - good eyes, the right side is a bit softer. I sharpened it a bit so that the sharpness is more evenly balance on the mane, but you are right the picture is sharpest on the lower LHS. Anthony - Thank you very much. I read Saint-Exupery's quote once on a business class flight on the menu card and found that quote particularly hilarious because at that time the airline had just stopped giving out just any food in the economy class and I could not stop thinking that some financial controller was using this quote to proudly describe his work on saving costs for the "lower ranks". Edwin - that is very kind of you, I am seriously flattered (and I will keep posting pictures which I like better but which the MFT community will like less, LOL). Alex - thank you very much! No I have never heard of Nine Francois. I just googled her - great photography. Her zebra (http://www.artnet.de/Galleries/Artwork_Detail.asp?G=&gid=239&cid=73934&which=&aid=424175704&wid=424175898&source=exhibitions&rta=http://www.artnet.de) is really quite like one of my shots (http://www.myfourthirds.com/document.php?id=27768). Andy, Valter, Jeff, Chris - thank you very much!

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:30 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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sorry guys, I did NOT format my reply to your comments like that. The link to the original low res jpeg must have done something to my comment.

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:33 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

Coming late ...

and can only add my admiration.

Best wishes,

Horst Schmier HoF Win ¤ $1 at 16:17 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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Excellent capture.

Alan Letterman ¤1 at 21:16 EDT on 2007-Oct-14 [Reply]

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The simplicity intriques me...

It's fascinating to see such a large and complex animal portrayed in this way.

/epigraf

Kenny Mųller ¤1 at 06:11 EDT on 2007-Oct-15 [Reply]

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Klaus, yes--I suspected those spots don't show up on your monitor; probably need to double-check the calibration of my monitor. (Thanks also for posting your original photo.) Enjoyed looking at this one again!

Elisabeth Spector HoF Win ¤1 $ at 09:21 EDT on 2007-Oct-15 [Reply]

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Thank you Horst, Alan, Kenny and Elisabeth (again. I am sure that I have to fine tune the calibration of my monitor, too, as much as this is possible).

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:18 EDT on 2007-Oct-15 [Reply]

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My only complain is already adress in other comments. You should reedit this one, and adress the comment Elisabeth made she's right, it is a shame those zone that were incomplete dodged in PP. I'll come back to rate it. Otherwise, the best giraffe B/W in a long time. Best wishes!

Joćo Medeiros Win ¤ ¤1 at 16:06 EDT on 2007-Oct-15 [Reply]

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Joao - I sure would repair it if I saw where. I have "calibrated" my monitor with using this site (http://www.photofriday.com/calibrate.php). I am afraid if I started burning some areas I would create new areas which do not look "right". We will probably never solve the problem of different monitor properties. At some point I will get a real calibrated monitor (but will then everybody see the pictures like I see them?) ...

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 16:30 EDT on 2007-Oct-15 [Reply]

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Don't worry! Its quiet easy my friend. You don't need a well calibrated monitor to see imperfections on our PP workflow...just invert this photo in photoshop and work your way there, when your finish in burning/dodgind just invert again, its an old tip for PP. Best wishes! ;)

Joćo Medeiros Win ¤ ¤1 at 06:53 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Simple, ultra effective - excellent shot.

Stephen Lacy HoF ¤ $ at 08:30 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Don't know how I missed this.

Esmee Gonzales ¤ at 08:57 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Joao - thank you for your help. Inverting seemed to me a good idea, it did not help very much on a monochrome picture though. I tried to work on it in 600% magnification and I hope I repaired a couple of spots (and I hope these spots are not worse now, LOL).

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:33 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Steven, Esmee - thank you very much!

Klaus Er HoF Win ¤1 at 15:34 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Klaus, great eye. One needs to be creative to even image taking this shot!

Geno Sajko HoF Win ¤ $1 at 23:09 EDT on 2007-Oct-16 [Reply]

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Congatulations on this one entering the HOF. Well deserved.

adrian tear HoF Win ¤ $ at 02:43 EDT on 2009-Aug-14 [Reply]