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red door
Copyright ©2012, c. stirling bartholomew ¤

Super-Takumar 1:1.8/55 @f4

Photographer: c. stirling bartholomew ¤
Folder: South Park - Seattle
Uploaded: 2012-May-25 01:18 EDT
Current Rating: 0.00/0 (Weighted rating: 7.99)
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Camera: Panasonic G2
Lens: Other (please specify in image description)
Lens Adapter: None
ISO: 200
Aperture: f4
Shutter Speed: 1/500
Focal Length: 55mm
Flash: No
Tripod/Monopod: No
Critique Level: Dead Honest Critique

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Looks like someone got a bit too close when they parked outside the door! Red, white and blue; always a good colour mix.

Chris Pattison ¤ $ at 11:33 EDT on 2012-May-25 [Reply]

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good mix of colors and geometric lines here ...for simplicity sake I'd have preferred to have the tower and the pole on top removed ...cheers ;-)

dee vee HoF Win ¤ $1 at 11:54 EDT on 2012-May-25 [Reply]

Red white and blue ...

Chris,

... funny but that didn't even cross my mind. Thanks for looking and the comment.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤1 at 14:51 EDT on 2012-May-25 [Reply]

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Thanks DV,

I started to clone out the tower and decided it wasn't worth the effort. The sky is kind of low priority, could desaturate and darken it. The late in the day light across the white wall was what caught my eye.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤1 at 14:54 EDT on 2012-May-25 [Reply]

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I'm with Don here, I would go so far as to crop out the sky and just leave a wedge of the blue corrugated building at the top in a thin pie shape, I would probably clone out the pipe to simplify further. Just my two cents.

Charles Bonham ¤ $1 at 22:55 EDT on 2012-May-25 [Reply]

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Thank you Charles.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤1 at 16:25 EDT on 2012-May-26 [Reply]

tower and pole now removed ...

now someone will ask that the wire be removed at which point I will just say "no thanks" ...

I like it better without the tower, the object on the upper right "pole" (?) actually contributed to the composition but I think it is at as good without it and retroversion in LR is a snap.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤1 at 22:57 EDT on 2012-May-26 [Reply]

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Your compositions urban and contrast of the colors are recognizable as a style directly from the thumbnails. You have your own personal style and this is great Clay. Take care, Fed

Fed ® Win ¤ at 13:28 EDT on 2012-May-27 [Reply]

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I'm with Fed; your work is easily spotted just by looking at the thumbnail. I noticed some of us here; Don, Fed, Chris Pattison, and of course yourself, etc., has that kind of unique style that I envy so much!

I don't see anything need to be cloned-out. It looks very interesting for me.

Yoki Soufyan ¤ at 18:14 EDT on 2012-May-27 [Reply]

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Thank you Federico.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤ at 13:19 EDT on 2012-May-28 [Reply]

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Thank you Yoki.

Perhaps I will post some photos that are not so easy to identify.

c. stirling bartholomew ¤ at 14:06 EDT on 2012-May-28 [Reply]